Yet more boring poetry from YI

[YesIndeed]

The Skanker

Moulding myself to this live new mold
Of colour, sound and sweat
My body responds in like ways
Of the others in the pit

Zombie-like yet not at all
This whirling skanking whole
Each person who is there -
Each one is standing tall

Chains and braces bounce around
As shoes tap the on floor
The swinging arms and legs applaud
The band with a curtain call

Bowing, tucking in their ties
And doffing sweaty caps
The band will at last retreat
When the skankers have had their dance





Okay, I admit it, it sux... lol! :D

[psi]

that didn't suck.

[Prox]

Originally posted by psi
that didn't suck.

yeah, what he said . . . that was kinda cool

[YesIndeed]

Originally posted by Prox
yeah, what he said . . . that was kinda cool

He had to say something nice, otherwise he knew I'd have killed him. However, you can be honest without the threat of peril. :tongue:

[Prox]

no i honestly liked it

[YesIndeed]

:lol: Okay sweetheart.

[spidergoolash]

Originally posted by YesIndeed
He had to say something nice, otherwise he knew I'd have killed him. However, you can be honest without the threat of peril

i would have sigged you but, as you can see, that area is pretty full right now :D

oh, and i did like your poem :)

[YesIndeed]

Originally posted by spidergoolash
i would have sigged you but, as you can see, that area is pretty full right now :D

Oh spidey, you have no idea how long I've waited to hear that!! :D