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mthrlangl
10-09-2001, 08:32 AM
i wish
(inspired by R. Kelly's song with the same title)

i wish that i could see you smile,
i wish i could be worth your while.

i wish that you were in my life,
i wish that you would be my wife.

i wish that i could hold you now,
i wish that you could show me how.

i wish that i could turn back time,
i wish that i could make you mine.

i wish i didn't feel i'd die,
each time i looked into your eyes.

i wish that i could feel your love,
i wish that i could have a hug.

i wish that i could hear you laugh,
wish i could be your other half.

i wish that i could talk to you,
i wish that you would need me too.

i wish that we could be as one,
i wish that you would see i'm fun.

i wish that you would comfort me,
i wish that you could only see...

mthrlangl
10-09-2001, 08:33 AM
I like it. It's simple, but sincere :) Very sweet.

jadedskies
10-09-2001, 04:31 PM
some of it's a little corny, but it's damn good anyway!

Shogun
10-10-2001, 04:03 AM
Mth: That is quite a good poem.
I don't care if it's corny, or not, it's damned good, and even more true.
I know that I personally have wished every one of those things at least once...

*Shutting up before I completely swallow my foot*

JHowse
10-18-2001, 11:04 PM
Mth, it does sound like pop lyrics, but I know I wish for something like that.... It's nice to read words like that. :)