Droo's Poems

[WoppaMan]

This is a steam-of-consciousness poem. Take it for what you will:

Out draconian border scar, under ever without me.
To find the stop, it is inevitable. Don't go find without me.
Do no wrong, they say in boxes. Balloons and balloons and balloons.
I am blind, you cannot stop me. Find the ever-present flea.
Graceful outcasts line the streets with looks on their faces. They own boxes.
Round cats hide within themselves.
Awash in fields of under-anger and strategy.
Do you believe?
I do not, nor can I, nor do I, nor know I, it is far far away.
Condemnable.
Winding wind. Not a mistake, not a mistake.
They've found you, hiding under the table.
Out of the land.

[WoppaMan]

And here's another poem. You might not think it's a poem, but it is:

**** it all, the world's going to end anyway.

[Shogun]

Well, the first one I find strange, I don't exactly understand it.
The second one, you're right, it doesn't seem like a poem. It seems like something I just told a group of my friends last night.

[mthrlangl]

Shogun, I think you'd have to know him to even partially understand it (I do know him, and it still makes no sense). But, it's also stream of conciousness, so it's not likely to make too much sense.

Very nice, dear :)

[Shogun]

Well, I have trouble understanding myself. Which is fun.
WoppaMan: Show me an insight into your mind....

[WoppaMan]

When I write stream-of-consciousness poetry, which is the most common poetry that I write, it literally is stream of consciousness. I just write what comes out and what feels/sounds right. I might be able to tell you the mood I was in at the time, but that's really the only defining factor I could possibly explain. I guess the best advice I could give you for understanding my mind is to read my Thad story that I have posted in the stories section.

[YesIndeed]

WoppaMan: I thought your first poem was totally awesome. I sometimes write like that, but I usually defile it by defining it - or "cleaning it up". But your work has inspired me to lessen my pickiness and just go with the flow. :) Thanx!!