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TheFishee
01-23-2001, 01:08 AM
Still under construction....

The light that You shine
shall never set in my soul
it might be rainy
Yet overcast
Well once the clouds depart
a rainbow, never so bright
breaks a smile warmly over your lips
from any angle given
a rainbow produced
it radiates away from a weakened body
it should rather the bearer strenghten
and somehow, something better
grows or lies dormant inside
it shine its light
at any given time
as the key that would be needed

Signing Out.

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Calm-ness - Does it bring beauty or a carpet of death apon its wings of mist....
Knowledge - Is it the Light You See before You Die ??

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MissLeo
01-23-2001, 01:42 AM
*sigh* Your poetry has a way of touching my soul and setting it ablaze, Cameron. How magnificently I burn...you must not become despondent that others do not appreciate your beautiful talent at all. i think most are awed into silence, like when they watch the Bolshoi Ballet perform...deadly silence, until the final bow http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif You are yet to take that bow my Bardic friend! *hugs*

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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/specialclouds.html

TheFishee
01-23-2001, 02:56 AM
You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...

that got me thinking.....eeeek
another poem...

/me tries one of those tail whack thingies on Ele
but remmebers that his tail is chopped up into pieces and so then just bumps into the tankie with
Orcie...
hehehehe

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Calm-ness - Does it bring beauty or a carpet of death apon its wings of mist....
Knowledge - Is it the Light You See before You Die ??

MissLeo
01-23-2001, 03:18 AM
*Ele restores TheFishee's tail magically and hopes he will be inspired enough to finish his poem above and write the new one* As for tailwhacking a Royal Lioness, lil Fishee...come again?! Now if I were of the flesh-eating kind...I'd have you for brunchies (I'm hungweee!) Did you feed the Orcie? Grrrrr!

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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/specialclouds.html

TheFishee
01-23-2001, 03:32 AM
Ummm Orcie is on a diet, Again...http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/tongue.gifPP
I'll try and finish it ,
/me promnise http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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Calm-ness - Does it bring beauty or a carpet of death apon its wings of mist....
Knowledge - Is it the Light You See before You Die ??

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MissLeo
01-23-2001, 04:00 AM
Suddenly I remember why I adore you so Camy http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif your tenderness and caring is awesome! Go eaties (I'm going too) then maybe if I can connect to AOL IM, we can chat ok? Because of the Firewall I seem not to be able to easily connect from here. So, what DID Orcie eat? http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif ! No, don't tell me...grrrrr! Please post some more poetry..if you do..I may be persuaded to post some of my (wicked) ones *pouties* (MissLeo explains to all who read this -eeek they MUST be bored! - that "Orcie" is her virtual pet Killer Whale she takes with her wherever she goes on the Net - yes, she is receiving therapy http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif - and now and again TheFishee cares for Orcie, but hopelessly spoils and overfeeds her)
Go meet Orcie here: http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/ele/orca.html

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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/specialclouds.html

JHowse
01-24-2001, 08:17 AM
Orcie is magnificent, Ele. *rubs his hands on the smooth body...then feeds Orcie a fish* http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif

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Does driving a car from Saturn make me an alien?

I'm just a quick pee. - liltaz, fastest pee in the West!

That which does not make me barf, makes me stronger - possum37, fugly.net guru.

MissLeo
01-24-2001, 08:33 AM
Thumbies up for the nurturing ways of the Cancerian http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif Thankies Jonathan, I love my Orcie too.
Nw help me to persuade that stubborn lil yellowtail Fishee to post the completion of this incredible poem please? A snip of that handsome pincher of yours will do just fine...ROTFL

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<FONT COLOR="blue">Anything less than mad, passionate, extraordinary love is a waste of time. There are too many mediocre things in life and love should not be one of them.</FONT c>

JHowse
01-24-2001, 08:39 AM
*places a pincher against TheFishee's fin...takes another pincher and places it against his tail* You will now finish that poem, TheFishee. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/wink.gifhttp://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/tongue.gif

Hmmmmm...don't think that will work. Alien, I think we may need the level 9 probe, here. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/supergrin.gif

*high fives Ele* http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/wink.gif

Did you find your kitty, yet, Fishee?

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Does driving a car from Saturn make me an alien?

I'm just a quick pee. - liltaz, fastest pee in the West!

That which does not make me barf, makes me stronger - possum37, fugly.net guru.

Mama_Slapped_Me
01-25-2001, 03:49 PM
<FONT COLOR="Pink">hey i wrote this .... here it goes.......uh.... here i sit on the pot .......n i hear somethin hot drop .....with a plop...........uh hafta complete it .......later</FONT c>http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/birthday.gifhttp://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/cheeburga.gifhttp://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/nuts.gif

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i just drank milk .... :D

Alien
01-26-2001, 05:47 AM
Your poetry has a way of touching my soul and setting it ablaze, Mama_Slapped_Me.

http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/rofl.gif

You need serious help. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif

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"I'd like an order of fries, a quarter pounder with cheese, I love the light in your eyes, would you go out with me please? I am in love with a McDonald's Girl, she has a smile of innocence so tender and warm, she is an angel in a polyester uniform."

Mama_Slapped_Me
01-26-2001, 03:22 PM
<FONT COLOR="Purple">hey now waitaminute...i can do real poetry too ya know ....</FONT c><FONT COLOR="Navy">oh well almost .....</FONT c>http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/aliensmile.gif
<FONT COLOR="Maroon">.............. i see it flyin again</FONT c>away ......far away ....dont know where...
i've often sat here & noticed
how it comes n goes....
the Sparrow
so much like mt self esteem
walkin in n out of my livin room
its right here now...with me
then u walk in .....
the sparrow flies...
it too disappears
as i lay with u ,
for a few dollars more
.......

gotta go eat now
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i just drank milk .... :D

TheFishee
01-27-2001, 04:21 AM
kewlies
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http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif

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His Heart now carries the Heat of the Breathe of a Dragon's Rage and Fury
Yet it's Strength and courage is all but keeps it alive.