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MissLeo
01-15-2001, 01:54 AM
º Brother Sun º

[Eleonor d'Albis 2000]

Spice of green grass being mown,
Headiness of sun on just turned soil,
rush like a sweat-slicked summer beast
through my inner mind, touches my soul.

I come out of sleep on a run,
Back snapped straight, floating
doorwards, light as a feather caught
on a slow warm wind, knowing what it's
like to heal at the touch of a hand.

I look back: my nightclothes lie like
snakes' skins cast on the sudden summer
of my floor. Rank with old bones' long
winter pain, they reach mindlessly
for my heels.
I flee them, out into the sunlight...

Blue as a worm coiled in its long shadows
of its few days' ice and stone,
My skin sobs through every hungering pore
For light and air, while doves murmur in
new greens and swaying water in a barrel
casts liquid spangles on a wall...

Bare feet cleave to the grass carpet as
I proffer my flesh in a sacrament old
as blood and stone...
A ricket shrills somewhere under leaves,
As I ablaze in a twist of sinew and flame
become at one with brother Sun...


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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
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JHowse
01-17-2001, 08:22 AM
Originally posted by MissLeo:
º Brother Sun º

[Eleonor d'Albis 2000]
I look back: my nightclothes lie like
snakes' skins cast on the sudden summer
of my floor. Rank with old bones' long
winter pain, they reach mindlessly
for my heels.
I flee them, out into the sunlight...


I can't help but laugh at that part as I am the most guilty at leaving my clothes in piles on my floor. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif

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Does driving a car from Saturn make me an alien?

I'm just a quick pee. - liltaz, fastest pee in the West!

That which does not make me barf, makes me stronger - possum37, fugly.net guru.

MissLeo
01-17-2001, 08:30 AM
http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif! Yes, well..*blushie* I am much spoiled http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif I do not like to wear clothes to be honest and am told I should really join a nudist colony tee hee! I get scolded a lot for leaving my clothes all over the place. Do you get away with it? *gasp*
Thankies for reading my poem Sweet Crabby *hugs*

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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/specialclouds.html

JHowse
01-17-2001, 08:55 AM
Well, I can get away with it as it is my own place, but I do get in trouble when I am at home at my parents. My mother thinks that my socks have come alive and are capable of crawling under the bed in the snake-like fashion you so aptly described.

Going without clothes is indeed comfortable. I personally wouldn't go to any nudist location just because of the scary possibilities that exist, there. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif

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Does driving a car from Saturn make me an alien?

I'm just a quick pee. - liltaz, fastest pee in the West!

That which does not make me barf, makes me stronger - possum37, fugly.net guru.

MissLeo
01-18-2001, 12:24 AM
<FONT COLOR="Blue">Jon:</FONT c>Those soxies of yours sound like some Jamaican Rastafarian just might love to smoke them! Ever considered an export business? http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/wink.gif You are lucky to live on your own - it seems deliciously decadent in that you can indulge your "do as I want to" wilfulness to its full extent. I'd miss the organised homeliness of my family home though and I cannot cook for the life of me because of my nailies http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/wink.gif
In my poem I longed for an European Summer of exquisite beauty and restfulness as only France can give, but being in SA I must admit the temperatures soar, the sun bakes and it gets quite uncomfortable for a lil European vampie like me *sigh* Are the summers more moderate where you are?

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You will hear thunder and remember me, and think: she wanted storms. The rim of the sky will be the colour of hard crimson, and your heart, as it was then, will be on fire...
http://members.theglobe.com/missleo18/specialclouds.html

JHowse
01-18-2001, 09:10 AM
I live in FL, so the temperature and humidity are rather high from April until October. Only during the winter is it moderate. 60-70 degrees F.

I, too, miss the niceties of living with the family, but....freedom is nice, too. I cannot cook, either, but that is because I am a bachelor. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/lol.gif

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Does driving a car from Saturn make me an alien?

I'm just a quick pee. - liltaz, fastest pee in the West!

That which does not make me barf, makes me stronger - possum37, fugly.net guru.