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Hey, ask me to write a poem about anything you want. Just give me the subject, a description, and anything else you want me to put in it, and I'll see if I can try to pull out a poem from what you tell me.
Sorry, but it won't be long, probably only a short 4-line poem that isn't very good (assuming I'm able to write the poem at all), I'm relatively new to poetry. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
<font color="#000000">[Edited by CKH on October 04, 2000 (edited 1 time)]</font>
mthrlangl
10-04-2000, 05:08 AM
Butterflies! Or angels http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away. ~ Rev. 21:4
Okay, butterflies it is:
I can see them in the sky,
Always flying very high,
Flapping wings in all different colors,
Some are prettier than all of the others.
Anyone else? Not too many at a time please.
PolarBlast
10-04-2000, 08:13 PM
Better than I can do. How about one about beavers?
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"If the world didn't suck, we'd all fall off."
mthrlangl
10-04-2000, 08:21 PM
::applause::
Thank you http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and there shall be no more death, neither sorrow, nor crying, neither shall there be any more pain: for the former things are passed away. ~ Rev. 21:4
Beavers? Hmm, I'll think about that one for a bit.
PolarBlast
10-04-2000, 08:43 PM
Don't think TOO long. I WANT MY POEM!
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"If the world didn't suck, we'd all fall off."
Alien
10-05-2000, 04:07 PM
...and after Beavers, I choose "Aliens"! http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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rainbow. ...and Midian is where the monsters live." -Nightbreed]
Beaker
10-05-2000, 04:24 PM
I want a tragic poem in 10 lines or less that explains the futility of Ralph Nader's existence http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/wink.gif
Beaker
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KNSinatra
10-05-2000, 05:52 PM
Beaker, how about a haiku?
Green man in Boston
Wrongly threatened with arrest
Ralph had a ticket.
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En fuego, bebe.
Okay, excuse me if I'm late on the poems, peeps, but I'm busy.
Beavers:
Working in the river that flows,
They work hard, everyone knows,
Do you like them? Yes you do,
But don't get too close or they'll bite you
Aliens:
If you're watching the night sky,
UFOs are bound to fly,
Aliens are out in the night,
Watch them closely, they're outta sight!
Okay, I don't know the story of this Ralph Nader person, so I'll have to look that one up.
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Alien
10-05-2000, 08:01 PM
Very cool. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
I sense a successful thread!
KNS: That's so cool. http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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["Everything was true. God was an alien. Oz really is over the
rainbow. ...and Midian is where the monsters live." -Nightbreed]
Here's an add-on to the alien poem:
These creatures will never go in a zoo
If they come get you, you never know what they'll do
So keep a look out, they must be out there
The problem is, nobody knows where...
Alien
10-16-2000, 10:32 PM
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Pretty darn cool, anyone else have anything they want in a poem from CKH?
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["Everything was true. God was an alien. Oz really is over the
rainbow. ...and Midian is where the monsters live." -Nightbreed]
Alyth
10-17-2000, 12:22 AM
how about dreams?
and of course my favorite..wolves http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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Vidala
11-15-2000, 10:46 AM
Hey, I got a poem for you guys to read....it's on the Thong song by Sisco but I swiched it around. Would you like to see it?
mthrlangl
11-15-2000, 10:51 AM
Surely.
But, in the future, please start a new post when you have a change of topic. Thanks http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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"I will gather myself around my faith, for light does the darkness most fear." - Jewel
mthrlangl
11-15-2000, 01:01 PM
No biggie http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/smile.gif
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"I will gather myself around my faith, for light does the darkness most fear." - Jewel
Vidala
11-15-2000, 11:04 PM
oh, sorry about that...ok i'll just put it up as a new topic then; no problem
Eh, sorry I haven't paid attention to this topic for a long time. I'll try to write that your poem, Lys. I haven't had much time to write poetry, but in the mean time, here's a mushy poem I wrote a long time ago.
Before, the skies were dark and gray
Nothing was there to make my day
Now it's clear and turning blue
Because I've got someone as great as you
spidergoolash
11-27-2000, 09:16 PM
how about spiders http://www.aliensoup.com/ubb/smilies/supergrin.gif
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JHowse
12-08-2000, 03:08 PM
How about a phoenix?
Some other ideas:
cats
an eagle
a rocket to the moon
flying
sleeping
running
playing soccer
music
singing
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